ShadowLor's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Our Dream]

So...is this going to be for your game...?

Because it definitely sounds like a great soundtrack beginning. I don't know why everyone else rated it low. I think it's a great base to build on. Your chords sound very good, it's smooth, flows together, and you can definitely hear how a voice would just complete it. I'm not so great about writing for drums, so I can't say anything there lol. Sounded good to me, though.

Great job. 5

VincentVardia responds:

This Song might not even touch the game at all. It was just so we had something to keep our minds off it for a while.

Thanks again for boosting our confidence, our first vote was a 0. Now even i think it's hard to get a 0 in music making. Let's hope i get more people like you veiw this lol.

[Scribbler - Two Years]

You paint a very nice picture

I can definitely see the meadow and the vines. Very good job on that.

I absolutely love the way the trumpet crescendos all the time. Also, great job on the blending of the piano and trumpet. The piano sets quite a lovely base, very moving. Then the addition of the strings makes it even better. You've built a lovely piece.

Some things you might want to consider, though, I felt it was a bit repetitive. Although repetition is the base of every song, enough variation is needed to keep your listener interested. Also, the bell at the end was just that much out of tune.

Overall, fantabulous job 4/5

Scribbler responds:

It is a tad repetitive in the beginning, I should have added a bit more variation until the lead-up. The bell was a last-minute addition so that can always be taken care of. Thanks for the review.

[{Owning and Pwning}]

Cartman?! Is that you?!?!

Sweet monkey skittles! This definitely reminded me of gaming. Something like...Trolls meets UT on a playing field of n00bs and I had my favourite gun...*starts day dreaming* ahhh...good times...

Anyways! I love how it starts out, softly, luring you in and then HEAD SHOT! lol, okay it didn't explode, but I also loved how you added the voices in there. I really like the way it's...a little bit light for killing. Like, strolling through a nice meadow with butterflies and waterfalls and then *bam* slaughtering a couple people here, a couple there. What a nice day. (It very much reminded me of the Serenity board in UT2004)

Great use of percussion. Fantabulous. I rate it 1337

Much hope 5/5

fishfood2021 responds:

Thanks a lot buddy lol

I'm going to remix it to get the explosion in there. Thanks for the review.